Question at the gates

Standing at the gates

To the final destination

Stopped to ask a question.

What pain could be greater

A mouth to eat but couldn’t eat

A bed to sleep but no sleep

A heart that beats but cannot love

A wound from past

A present full of struggles

A future that is terminal.

And came the answer

All pains are equally painful.

None the more none the less

Some experience pains being through it

Some helpless to see loved ones go through it.

You decide to choose a pain,

fighting one accepting the other.

But its always there you cant escape ever.

20 thoughts on “Question at the gates

    1. Now its become a part of my posts it seems incomplete without your word. I just wish my writings always be so good or get better so that I keep getting your words.๐Ÿ™‚๐ŸŒผโค๏ธ

      1. Lol. Your writting is pure excellence and the feelings behind each piece are the true driving force, which is why I feel that it captivates me so deeply, my friend.โค๏ธ

      2. True my writing is just driven by feelings , I dont know how correct my writing is , but the feelings are very true. And you were able to read that beyond my words, I am thankful to you๐Ÿค—โค

      3. I read both the words and feelings. You really convey your messages perfectly for me. I see it as if you are literally painting pictures with what you write. That’s why I love it so much.โค๏ธ

      4. Thank you dear Grace to know this from you means a lot ,I had a doubt not being from literature background but thankyou๐Ÿ™‚ friend this gave me lot of confidence.

  1. Everyone has his/ her own experience of life..the pain, the happiness. Some fight through, some struggle and some just surrender to the pain. It is the faith and the inner strength which takes one through all the pains.
    Stay blessed always Gayatri..
    ๐Ÿ™๐ŸŒน๐ŸŒน

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