I waited really long for you

Even stood beside you

To see your perspective

To be a part of it

I held you through all of it.

Now waiting for you

To help me fix.


You are gone ,now on your own

You have found your newly made self

You are eager to explore all that you can

Now leaving me to be on my own.

You kept discovering with this newness

In the process loosing parts of it to emptiness.

And then you are back to me

Now looking for the missing pieces.

You went on a journey to experience the new found completeness

Not knowing you were only complete with my part in it.

22 thoughts on “Complete

  1. This is so beautiful, Gayatri. A poignant poem, you can almost feel the words. I would like to invite you to write a poem and win an Ebook, I just started my new blog, Shobana’s Book Station, and would like to introduce the blog. Ends on 11/07. Please press on the link – the details are on my website. You get to choose the book you want to read. Thank you and please share with your friends. It will be a great way to know about each other’s writing and works.

    1. Wow , thanks I surely will write to win an ebook. Yes I wish my friends can read here in comments and get in touch with you🙂.

  2. Hey! Just reaching out to let you know that you’ve been nominated for the Sunshine Blogger Award:
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  3. Beautiful thought..
    You express emotions through words so beautifully and subtly….never too loud..just being enough..
    Stay blessed always

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